I think I need to re-edit Those Who Hunt Monsters

I just re-read this over the last couple of nights, to re-familiarise myself with what’s already been put down. I wanted to make sure that foreshadowing points in the right place, and that I don’t repeat scenes because I couldn’t remember if I’d written them or not.

And oh dear god, what a heap of trash the prose is. I cannot believe how much I’ve improved since starting this series. Adverbs everywhere, bizarre implications that never get explained, assumptions that the reader has hung on every word.

Nah, that’s gotta go. All of it. I’m just not sure how to start haha.